Roleplay Assistance

by Guest July 18th 2011, 11:44 pm

Assistance

Hey all you wonderful members! So we've noticed a wide range of roleplay posts in our fabulous rp area. Some of you post long detailed posts, some medium, some shorter. Here is where you can get assistance lengthening or improving your posts. This is totally optional. No one will be forced to do this. This is an opportunity for you. We have willing members who will give you pointers, assess posts and help you out in general. Post here or send a PM and they can help you out. Or perhaps you dont want one-on-one assistance, but a few pointers. Below are some pointers for anyone in lengthening and imrpoving your posts.

Add movements. Instead of simply "she stood" or "she walked" add in a "her tail swished back and forth" occasionally. It gives more detail to movement and really makes the picture come alive.
Give reasoning. Why is your character saying what they are? What are their thoughts behind their words? What are their motives? Not only do we get to know your charactre more, but it gives your posts depth and maturity.
Describe. How is your character running? Is it fast or slow? Do they flash through the trees? What do the surroundings look like? Any added description helps paint the picture and improve your posts

Those are just a few of many pointers that can be given. Feel free to contact any council member. They may not have time and refer you to another council member. Again, remember this is optional - for YOU. I hope some of you will take advantage of this opportunity!